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CriancaBunnyears |
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Oh wow.. I really like that! *reads some more*
Crianca "That's no ordinary rabbit." Certified Ant-Lover |
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demandred5151 |
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We read this in English class today, and I thought it was pretty cool. It's called Ozymandias and is by Shelley.
I met a traveller from an antique land Who said: Two vast and trunkless legs of stone Stand in the desert...Near them, on the sand, Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown, And wrinkled lip, sneer of cold command, Tell that its sculptor well those passions read Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things, The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed; And on the pedestal these words appear: 'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings: Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!' Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare The lone and level sands stretch far away. |
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umaeril |
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PunkRockPrincess2 |
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We read both of these in English class...
Balances Nikki Giovanni in life one is always balancing like we juggle our mothers against our fathers or one teacher against another (only to balance our grade average) 3 grains of salt to one ounce truth our sweet black essence or the funky honkie down the street and lately i've been wondering if you're trying to tell me something we used to talk all night and do things alone together and i've begun (as a reaction to a feeling) to balance the pleasure of lonliness against the pain of loving you We Real Cool Gwendolyn Brooks THE POOL PLAYERS. SEVEN AT THE GOLDEN SHOVEL. We real cool. We Left school. We Lurk late. We Strike straight. We Sing sin. We Thin gin. We Jazz June. We Die soon. Can't remember What went wrong last September Though I'm sure that you'd remind me If you had to... Our love was comfortable And so broken in... |
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umaeril |
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Valroth |
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I like that We Real Cool one! Now to show my simplicity after all of those. Took me a bit to find it.
Carnation Milk Carnation milk is the best in the land; Here I sit with a can in my hand. No tits to pull, no hay to pitch, You just punch a hole in the son of a bitch Anonymous -------------------------
Gambit: I got a Royal Flush Wolverine: Five of a kind. *Wolverine's hand blows up.* Gambit: You got what? X-Saga |
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demandred5151 |
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Heh...we just read that 'We real cool' poem a few day ago.
Here's one I found amusing (and true): Poetry - by Richard Lees People who analyze poems word for word Should be awakened some Thursday morning to the sound of a chainsaw cutting through their left leg I really had no reason to pick a Thursday or a chainsaw or a left leg But someone will undoubtedly think one up. And here's a cool haiku Polar Bear and Rifle - by Peter Knopfel on the tundra bleak a white king falls! BLOODY DEED - THE RIFLEMAN BLINKS |
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The Gov |
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Let it be added that there is a difference between 'analysed' and 'explored' and in their eagerness to appear spontaneous and passionate and exciting (a frame of mind which has been popular ever since the Romantics, and perpetuated by poets such as Whitman) some people condemn any kind of study of poetry as somehow taking the life out of it, dessicating it, pinning it down like a butterfly. Sometimes this is true. Sometimes, on the other hand, a poem is written to be read word by word, not only in one huge gulp. When you look at each word then the poem opens up like a flower. Look at the Eliot, for example:
Quote: If you don't pay some attention to the word 'Priapus' - even look it up in the dictionary if it's a stranger to you - then the line flicks past without any particular weight. If, however, you let it open up suggestively into an idea of sex and wildness then the whole poem gains an extra measure of depth. The same occurs elsewhere in Eliot. One word will act as a gateway. What saves the Apollinax poem from being merely a dissectable object, is his sense of rhythm and placement. 'Priapus in the shrubbery' has a good sound to it, no matter what the words mean. The word 'analyse' ought to be outlawed, and replaced by the word 'explore.' An explorer might also look at a poem phrase by phrase, picking out particular words, but they don't do it to pin the poem down - they do it to open it up. ------ hailing from Umbagollah - http://www.umbagollah.com
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umaeril |
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The Gov |
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Ya - plus I like the word 'shrubbery.' It makes me think of Monty Python bobbing around in suits are armour, calling themselves "the knights who say, "Ni!" and demanding shrubbery from ... was it Arthur?
I just felt that Richard Lees' poem was begging for a rebuttal. The idea that people who try to pry meaning out of individual words in poems are somehow laughable, uptight or wrong is hackneyed. If Eliot wrote about chainsaws and left legs and Thursdays then there really would be something in it worth finding out about. And no, I don't think anyone reading the first part of Lees' poem would be tempted to invent ulterior motives for his choice of days or limbs unless they were really knotted up in the idea of finding interpretations for things or else trying to write a paper for a teacher. He hasn't written it in a voice that asks to be studied. Eliot does. There are other poets who do. Lees doesn't. (I'm not attacking you demandred, if it seems that way. It's just that I've heard points of view like Lees' used to justify some sloppy pieces of poetry in the past, so I'm suspicious of it.) ------ hailing from Umbagollah - http://www.umbagollah.com
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Decaying Velvet Star |
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WITCHCRAFT BY A PICTURE
by John Donne I FIX mine eye on thine, and there Pity my picture burning in thine eye ; My picture drown'd in a transparent tear, When I look lower I espy ; Hadst thou the wicked skill By pictures made and marr'd, to kill, How many ways mightst thou perform thy will? But now I've drunk thy sweet salt tears, And though thou pour more, I'll depart ; My picture vanished, vanish all fears That I can be endamaged by that art ; Though thou retain of me One picture more, yet that will be, Being in thine own heart, from all malice free. *I succumb my being once more to the ethereal darkness-
to that which I know best and have learned to call Home* ![]() |
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umaeril |
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nice one.
She walks in Beauty George Gordon Byron, Lord Byron She walks in beauty, like the night Of cloudless climes and starry skies; And all thats best of dark and bright Meet in her aspect and her eyes: Thus mellowd to that tender light Which heaven to gaudy day denies. One shade the more, one ray the less, Had half impaird the nameless grace Which waves in every raven tress, Or softly lightens oer her face; Where thoughts serenely sweet express How pure, how dear their dwelling-place. And on that cheek, and oer that brow, So soft, so calm, yet eloquent, The smiles that win, the tints that glow, But tell of days in goodness spent, A mind at peace with all below, A heart whose love is innocent! |
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CriancaBunnyears |
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I have to say, I think personal exploration of a poem is fine, but any time you try to force it on someone it becomes wrong and deserving of the poem above. That's why I hate doing poetry in school. I like what I get out of a poem, not what someone else got out of it and what the "masters" think of it. There are differences between what the writer felt, what the writer meant, what the writer may later have seen, what "poetry analysts" see, what one person sees, etc. I had a grand debate once over whether every good piece of writing HAD to have some meaninng put in by the author. I say no. I say the meaning is taken by the reader. Yes, it can be put there, but not neededly. Like Frost, I hate Frost, but I live in NH so we read him all the time. Eccchhh.
ANyways, one I like: The Forester Wilfrid Wilson Gibson The buzz-saw, screeching, as it cut Its way through pine-planks, filled the hut With such a tearing din, He heard no footfall on the sill, And not an inkling had, until The belt snapped and the blade stood still, A stranger had come in. But, as he dodge the flying belt, Side-stepping, a soft touch he felt On his left shoulderblade; And, turning, looked with mute surprise Into unknown green-shadowed eyes, The color of a pond that lies Deep in a forest-glade. Dark eyes that held no daylight gleam Looked into his; and in a dream With icing blood he stood; As in the presences, looming there With cloudy plumes of pine-dark hair, He recognized with cold despair The spirit of the wood- THe spirit of the wood that he For years had ravished, tree by tree, TO feed his ravening mill: And, as she turned with sighing stir, Unquestioning, the old forester With halting footstep followed her Over the darkening sill. I've liked that one since I first read it in the fall. Crianca "That's no ordinary rabbit." |
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Marte666 |
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Ode to the Holy Sacrement
Writer: Federico Garcia Lorca The razorblades lay on the dressing tables waiting impatiently to sever the heads. In a dead man's house, the children pursued a serpent of sand around the dark corner. Clerks asleep on the fourteenth floor. Cables and half-moon with tremors of insect. Bars without people. Screams. Heads on the water. To assassinate the nightingale came three thousand men with shining knives. Old women and priests wept resisting a shower of tongues and flying ants. Interesting fact on the poet who wrote this: Quote: |
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The Gov |
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I agree that to force one's opinion of a poem on other people is wrong - to suggest is fine, to explain is fine, to impose implacable force is merely to make a nuisance of oneself - but if Lees is talking specifically about people who force their interpretations of poetry on others then he never explains it. If you take his poem as read then he is referring, wholesale, to everyone who analyses poems word by word, making no distnction between the world's most annoying lecturer and the silent enthusiast in her hermit's cell. That was what bugged me.
I wonder what would be the best way to show people how to explore poems and stories. Doing books in class at school never worked for me. I think I would have preferred a smaller group, and a teacher who didn't have the pressure of a curriculum and a school board and exams behind him. The Enemy. C. Baudelaire My youth was nothing but a sombre storm Shot through from time to time by brilliant sun Thunder and rain such havoc did perform That there remain few fruits vermillion Now I have reached the autumn of my mind I must with rake and spade turn gardener, Restore again the inundated ground Where water hollows holes like sephulchres. And who knows if my reverie's new flowers Will in this soil washed like a sandy shore Find mystic ailment to make them bloom? - O sorrow, sorrow! Time eats life away, The Foe obscure which does our hearts consume Grows stronger from our blood and our decay! ------ The Umbagollah forum.
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umaeril |
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- When I'm Down -
by Ernie Morrison When I'm down and out With no frogs to kill No solos to play No drums to fill When there's no lamb's meat On my lamb-meat shelf When I'm outta glue And just sniffing myself When I call to Baal, And he's too busy, As Overlords tend to be. Then I remember People are dying As far as the eye can see. It brings a smile to my face, And to my heart a warmthful glee, I believe in death, my friend, Cuz death believes in me. ![]() |
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umaeril |
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My fave poem would have to be "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening" by Robert Frost, followed closely by 'Preludes" by T.S. Eliot. I also really like the poetry of Sylvia Plath.. i love the meaning behind the abstracts. Sorry, I'm too lazy to look for them, but they're fairly well known so I'm sure you've heard of them before.
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